Chapter 1 (Part. 2): Kumari P. – Shameless in Seattle

Today is my “New Beginning”—

I’ve been nervous about today for a while now, especially in the past week. Not just the new school year, but the first year of high school, in a new school, a few states away from my home town.  Everything is new, but what frightens me the most are the changes I’ve decided to make to myself.

The new “me” that I’ve decided to become.

The clock hanging on the living room wall says 4:26a.m. Despite the darkness, I can clearly see the clock’s hands and numbers. The thunder roars and I look up to the large window spanning the length of the living room’s wall. It’s been raining for two days now, and I guess today won’t be any different from the last two.

“Hey, Kumari.” I hear my sister’s voice chiming in, barely audible above the rainfall against the window. “You’re up early.”

“I didn’t really sleep.”

When I turn to face her, I see her approaching me from down the hall with her planned outfit draped over her right shoulder. Past the stairs leading down into the living room, my sister, Amber’s room, is on the right side, same as mine. The door is open with light from her lamp flooding into the hallway and climbing the opposite wall.

“What’s wrong? Are you nervous, or were you too excited to sleep?” She crosses her arms and cocks her head to the side with a sly smirk. “Today is a big day for you.”

Because of that, her pale skin, white gown, and shoulder-length black hair, she looks like a ghost sauntering out of a passage to heaven.

“Well you, too,” I snap back, managing to keep my voice down. “You’re skipping 8th grade straight into high school. You actually slept well last night?”

“Like a baby,” she answers, stopping in front of me to lean against the rail. “I’m not worried about these kids out here.”

I’m not exactly trying to, but I know I’m frowning at her. To save face, I sigh and turn my attention back to the window while leaning fully on the rail.

Amber’s always been this way. So cocky, smooth, and abrasive. She has a way of puffing herself up and making everyone else around her seem trivial. Even now, having lived with her for 13 years of my life—the entire 13 years she’s been alive—I’m still not quite used to it. I can handle it, sure, but there are times that it gets to me.

…Shamefully, it may be because I’ve always envied her attitude in a way.

“Well I’m not exactly worried about them. I’m worried about me,” I somehow find the courage to admit. “Remember when I said I plan on changing myself?”

“Yeah, I remember. Today’s the day?”

“Yup. I’ve got a lot planned, so if you need to shower and stuff, you can go first. I’m gonna be a while,” I explain, now turning to face her while managing to force a shrug and smile.

“Well, alright,” she groans while nudging herself away from the rail to walk past me. “Oh, by the way—”

She suddenly stops, just inches away from me, and rests her hand on my shoulder. Looking into my eyes with an intense, almost worried expression, she frowns a little.

“Try not to get too riled up. You’re doing that glowy-eye thing again.”

“Huh? I didn’t even notice—”

“Yeah,” she continues with a teasing smile. “It’s not a big deal for me or Dad to see it, but don’t let Mom find out.” She advises before tapping my shoulder twice and walking past me, to the bathroom.

I close my eyes and take a deep breath to calm down. I suppose that’s why I could see the hands on the clock so clearly, even in near total darkness. After a few moments, I turn my eyes to the living room—more specifically, the clock hanging on the living room wall beneath the window.

Besides the general shape and white background of the clock itself, I can’t make anything out. Not even the numbers. As it should have been all along.

Damn it…  I still can’t control it. I’ll have to be even more careful at school.

After a few seconds of staring at the clock to make sure the crystal-clear vision doesn’t return, I make my way back to my room with a sign.

“Right. Well, let’s go pick out an outfit,” I groan to myself.

—It’s been at least 30 minutes now since Amber began showering, and I’ve been going through my closet this entire time, trying to find something to wear.

“That won’t work…” I mutter, sliding the yellow shirt to the left.

It’s funny, I used to not care about things like this. Maybe because, up until last summer, everything in my closet was black. I struggled every day to blend into the shadows, hiding behind my clothes and black hair to keep anyone from noticing me. But instead, I got the opposite reaction and often found myself being singled out and ridiculed for being reclusive, reticent, and weird. My social anxiety was so bad that I often stuttered horribly when made to speak to anyone outside of my family, and it sadly still comes out when I’m panicked.

“Come on, what looks good with red…?”

I spent most of the summer practicing speaking out loud in the mirror, which—let me tell you—was one of the most embarrassing and scariest things I’ve ever done. Possibly because I know what my goals and flaws are, I couldn’t help but notice the “what are you doing/who do you think you’re fooling/this isn’t you” look in my own eyes as I spoke. But after a few months, it got better…

“…What looks good with red?”

Finally, after a moment of staring, I lean back with my eyes focused on what seems to be the perfect outfit.

“Hey, Kumari, I’m done,” I hear Amber behind me, leaning into the room from the doorframe. “Your turn.”

Just in time… This’ll be perfect.

—I’ve been thinking this over for months now, and decided I can’t back out on this.

While looking at myself in the mirror one day, wearing a set of my new clothes, I decided it might not be enough. If I’m going to be a new me, then I need to stand out. I need to stand out even when I don’t want to. No, especially when I don’t want to. That’s the only way I can call myself a different person.


“Hey, Amber, come here a sec,” I shout, stepping out of the bathroom and drying my hair off.

This will be the first test.

After a few seconds, I see Amber making her way from the kitchen, to the right of the stairs, coming up to meet me. Finally, after making it up, she turns to approach me.

“Yeah, what is it—oh, I like your shirt.”

“Thanks, do you think it’ll look good with red?”

“Uhm… I mean, I guess so. Red and baby blue can go together, but—”

Before she can complete her sentence, I flip the towel down and let my hair fall over my shoulders.

Rather than the screaming respond I’d expected, Amber stands in silence, staring at me. Her eyes travel up and down the length of my hair, her mouth hanging open as if she’d just seen someone get hit by a train. She frowns, tilts her head, and studies me like I’m a winged cat or something.

“So? What do you think?” I question, cutting into the silence.

“Your hair!” She finally exclaims. “You dyed it!?”

“Uh-huh!” I answer with a nod. “Candy Apple Red!”

“It’s not a wig?!” Before I can react, she reaches out and yanks a few of the strands.

“Ah—no!” I slap her hand away and pull back, holding onto the strands she just pulled. “It’s my actual hair!”

“Why!? Why’d you dye it!?”

“To stand out!” I argue. “Quit acting like that, are you trying to make me feel bad or something!?”

“I—” She suddenly stops, takes a deep breath with her hand held out as if telling me to wait, and then calmly continues. “—do they know?”

“Dad knows. He’s the one who took me to get the stuff I needed,” I explain, crossing my arms and holding my composure.

“Mom’s gonna flip sh—”

“— I know, I know, but Dad said he’ll help me talk her down,” I interrupt. ‘Besides, I had to do this.”

Adjusting my hair so that it falls behind my back, I turn to lean over the rail and look ahead to the window. It’s still raining, but it’s a little brighter outside now.

“What do you mean?”

“I’m tired of hiding and trying to be invisible. I want people to notice me. I want to matter. I want to…” I pause for a moment, trying to find the right words. And somehow, “…be a whole person, for once,” is what comes out.

To be honest, I expect her to laugh. Knowing Amber, something like “that’s stupid” or “dying your hair won’t change who you are” is what I expect.


“I see…”

“Huh?” I turn to face her and notice that she’s taken a spot next to me, leaning against the rail, our arms almost touching.

“I get it. Maybe this is the best way for you,” she says, her voice low as she faces me. “You were always hiding behind your hair. Now, even if you try to hide behind it, you’ll still stick out.”

“Hah, yeah, that’s the plan,” I answer, feeling embarrassed that even she noticed the way I used my long hair and the bangs I grew out to hide myself.

“Looks like you’re even letting your big forehead and bushy eyebrows show now, huh?” She jokes while resting her palm on my forehead.

“I figured it’d be pointless if I hid the parts of myself I don’t like, right?”

“That’s right. Look at you, growing up.”

“…Well that’s not something you wanna hear from your little sister,” I mutter.

“We’re a year apart, it’s not that big a deal,” she giggles, pulling her hand back. “Does that mean you’ll be standing up for yourself now, or am I gonna have to almost get expelled again?”

Hah, that’s right.

I used to get picked on a lot more before Amber graduated elementary and started going to my middle school. She got into fights with a lot of the girls who picked on me because I was too afraid to defend myself. She got suspended so much that they threatened to expel her and I had no choice but to at least attempt to take up for myself, just to keep her from getting expelled.

“Well, it’s not like I couldn’t handle anyone who tries to bully me, right?” I answer, finding myself feeling a little uneasy.

“But that’s always been the case.”

“I guess I just don’t like hurting people, and if I end up going too far, I might—”

“You won’t go too far,” she cuts in, her hand on my shoulder. “But if you don’t do anything at all, you’ll be exactly who you were last year and every year before that.”

I sigh, having no choice but to accept that.

“You’re right. If it comes down to it, I might have to get into a fight,” I say out loud, as if to reassure myself of this reality.

“Yup. And with hair like that, you’ll most likely attract some negative attention.” Suddenly, she turns somber. “But, you know, just…don’t…”

“…Don’t worry about these kids out here?” I mock her, trying to liven the mood.

“Hah, Now you got it,” she exclaims while slapping my arm. “C’mon, we gotta get going! I didn’t put on these boots to be late on the first day!”

She turns and makes her way back to the stairs, skipping proudly in her new black boots and floral green dress. Chuckling, I follow behind her.

“By the way, think you can carry me to the bus stop? Just ’cause I look good in heels doesn’t mean I like them.”

“No way. I’m not about to carry you, your backpack, and my backpack,” answer, following her down the stairs. “If I have to get used to this hair, you have to get used to wearing heels.”

“Jerk. And after everything I’ve done for you,” she says, sounding almost hurt.

“You’ll be alright.”

No remorse. I have to admit, it feels nice. Maybe it’s this new “fiery redhead” persona, but I’m feeling different already. I’ll just have to make sure I don’t “go mad with power” and become an actual jerk.

But, if it’s Amber, I don’t have to restrain myself too much.

—The rest of the morning goes about how I expected.

“Oh my God!” Mom’s reaction was what I expected Amber’s to be. “What did you do!?”


“It’s a wig, right!?” Without warning, Mom reaches out to grab my hair.

Luckily, thanks to my earlier experience with Amber, I manage to take a step back and narrowly avoid her fingertips, keeping my hair out of reach. I don’t care how surprised she is, it hurts having your hair pulled.

“How did you—when did you get hair dye!?”

“A few days ago,” I answer, finding myself somehow composed.

“And who gave you permission to—Walter,” she cuts herself off, growling to turn and look at Dad who, despite his much larger size, turns to avoid her glare, obviously grinning at her outrage. “You didn’t think you should have told me about this?”

“What? So you could yell at her and scare her out of being herself?”

“I’m not yelling at her!”

“You kind of are though,” Amber chimes in from beside me.

You stay out of it. You were in on this, too, weren’t you!”

“No! I found out this morning, too! If I knew, I would’ve talked her into dying it green or something,” Amber taunts with a grin, as if trying to further provoke Mom’s rage. “You know, to match my eyes. She could be my walking accessory.”

“Nice,” I growl and glare at Amber, who smiles back at me and shrugs shamelessly. “Look, Mom, I’m sorry, but we’re gonna miss the bus if we stay and talk about it. But I’ll tell you everything after school, okay?”

Practically blurting that out, I begin my hasty retreat, backing out of the kitchen toward the front door in the living room.

“…Fine. You’re going to tell me everything,” Mom answers, sounding a little more calm but still just as irritated. “Be back by 6pm. That’s your new curfew.”

What!?” Now it’s Amber’s turn to be outraged. “Curfew!? Do we look like kids to you!?”

…And we almost made it out of here in one piece, too…

Excuse me?” Mom crosses her arms to challenge her.

From over Mom’s shoulder, Dad glances at me with eyes that seem to say “why didn’t you stop her?” From behind Amber, I look back at him and shrug, using body language to say “What was I supposed to do?”

“We are not about to have this fight right now,” Mom barks, her chest puffing up like a dog ready to fight.

“I didn’t skip a grade for nothing! Why do I still have a curfew!?”

Not really knowing what else to do, and still being directed by dad to do something, I put on my hoodie and open the front door.

“Amber, we can talk about this when we get home. We’re gonna be late if you have this fight now,” I explain while pushing Amber’s coat to her chest.

She growls, but ultimately understands, muttering under her breath while putting the coat on.

“I can’t stand this house!” Amber shouts on her way out, making sure to get the last word.

I sigh, turning to face Mom and Dad from the other side of the door.

“We’ll be home by 6pm and I’ll explain the hair, Mom. Love you,” I say, trying to ease the tension with a gentle smile and wave.

“Have a good day, Honeypot,” Dad responds, lifting his cup of coffee in a “cheers” motion.

“Love you, too,” Mom resentfully says. “Tell your sister she’s in so much trouble when she gets back. And so are you, Crabhead.”

“Ah—” I can’t tell if she’s joking or not. That wasn’t a joking tone, and she didn’t smile either. “Hah—right. Uhm… See ya.”

I close the door, lock it, and rest my forehead against it.

If this is how today’s starting, I’m in for a long one…

“C’mon, we gotta go!” I can barely hear Amber’s voice over the downpour. When I look back, she’s standing on the sidewalk, far out from the porch where I’m standing. “This rain’s gonna ruin my dress!”

I roll my eyes before putting my hood up and running down the steps and driveway to meet her. Once beside her, I let my hood down to share her umbrella. The bus stop, from what I remember, is about a 15 minute walk from our house, and the time is now 6:04a.m. I didn’t get to work as thoroughly on my hair as I’d have liked to in the hour that I had, so I plan on finishing the job after school—of course, after explaining to Mom why I dyed it.

“This new year’s gonna suck,” she complains. “Curfew. Seriously? 6pm? Most babies don’t even get put to bed until 8!”

“I really doubt parents are letting their babies roam the streets until 8pm,” I chuckle. “By the way, she said you’re in trouble when you get home.”

“No, she’s in trouble when I get home,” Amber snaps back. “I’ll give her a curfew.”

…Often times, I’m pretty sure Mom regrets how much Amber takes after her.

“Right. Well, I guess it’ll take the heat off of my new hair if nothing else,” I shrug.

“I can’t believe her,” she continues muttering, more to herself than to me. “6pm. No way it’s going down like that.”

With Amber complaining the entire way, we begin our trip to the bus stop.

Today will be the start of the new me. The new Kumari Price. And I’ll admit, beneath this mask of snarky bravado, I’m trembling.

More than anything… I want to finally make a friend this year.

A real friend.


Chapter 1 (Part. 1): Chloe S. – Sardonic in Seattle

“Ah—!” I wake up, gasping for breath.

My chest is on fire and everything feels hot. My head is pounding like someone’s been stabbing at my temples all night. Doing my best to stop my thoughts, I struggle to calm down. Breathing silently, yet heavily, I check my eyes.

No tears this time.

I must be getting better, I find myself thinking.

After sitting up in bed, I habitually pick up my phone and push the home button. The usual lock screen is there—the background is a picture of a river, and the time is clearly visible. 5:30a.m.

No texts. No missed calls. It’s been almost a month now.

‘Bout what I expected, I think while standing up and tossing my phone over my shoulder, onto the bed.

Another day, huh?

Let me explain something about “heartbreak”. There are some obvious things, and some not so obvious things. So let’s start with the obvious:

It sucks.

Holy crap, it sucks. And not only does it suck, but it sucks for a long-ass time. It’s not like stubbing your toe—a sharp, awful sting that goes away after a few breaths. No, heartbreak feels more like drowning. It’s horrible, draining, and desperate—but then sometimes you manage to catch a breath and it stops hurting for a moment—and then you’re plunged into the deep by another wave, struggling and teetering between wanting to fight for life and wanting to give up and die to end the pain.

You go crazy. You get desperate. And much like an actual drowning victim, you tend to drag down anyone who reaches out to help you.

Now, the not so obvious thing:

You don’t just wake up one day and get over it. Sure, that sounds obvious, but what isn’t so obvious is what you are looking for. One day, you’ll wake up from a dream about that person, or a sudden memory, or perhaps a song on the radio you two used to hear together—and your world will crumble. Your heart will hurt, your chest will burn, your throat will tighten, and your eyes will water. For a moment, you’ll feel like you’re dying—or perhaps wish you were.

But after a few moments of accepting that you’re hurting, you’ll get up, get ready for your day, and step out of the house. Of course, the pain will still be there, but you’ll manage to smile, talk, and laugh like it’s not. You’ll experience the pain for fractions of your day instead of the entire day.

Look for that.

“It’s been weeks, what the hell? Are we just strangers now?” Muttering to myself after my long shower, I stare at my toothbrush before brushing my teeth.

After everything we went through together, what, are you just done with me now?

Violently as I can, I spit the toothpaste into the sink and turn the water on full blast.

“Like I give a damn. I had a life before you. I can live after you, too!”

Also, look for the anger. When you can move past the crippling sadness into that empowering angry stage of heartbreak, you’ve truly begun to heal.

“I hope she gives you herpes!” I shout nonsense before rinsing my mouth out, as if it will burn away the foul words still wanting to escape my mouth.

—Well, you’re either at the beginning stages of healing or becoming a murderer. Either way, that’s some kind of progress. Better than being stuck in place, right?

I spit again. “Idiot.”

It’s been raining for three days straight now—

Having finally gotten dressed by 6:00a.m., I make my way to the front door and open it. Before actually stepping out, I look back at the hallway, with the kitchen barely a silhouette in the distance.  Dad hasn’t gotten up yet. Since he doesn’t work until around noon, I usually leave the house before he wakes up and am usually in bed before he gets home. As a result, despite living in the same house, we hardly see each other.

“Have a good day,” I whisper to no one in particular before stepping out and closing the door behind me. “Later”.

The sky is veiled in a thick, rolling sheet of grey. With the sun risen high enough to claim its territory, the pitch black world is now various shades of grey and blue. The street, sidewalk, and houses are all tinted blue by the dim sunlight, and the grass is almost a deep purple. It’s like the entire law of color in this world has been rewritten by a five-year old.

“Know what? I’m sick of this ‘early morning to the bus stop’ crap,” I grumble, staring out into the rain from the safety of the awning. “If I don’t get a car by next year, I’m dropping out and leaching off Dad from the comfort of my room.”

It’s not like my empty threats will solve anything, but they do help me feel better for the moment. And as if to answer me, a bright flash blinds me for an instant and the sky roars with a fury that shakes the earth.

“Oh, shut up, you don’t even know him,” I argue back, looking to the sky. “He’ll be thanking me when he’s too old to take care of himself and my broke ass is still living here to take care of him. Hmph!”

Feeling somewhat proud of myself for challenging the Almighty God, I pull my hood up over my head and step off of the porch. And maybe I’m crazy or just imagining things but… did the rain just get heavier?

“…Okay, okay, I get it already… I should watch what I say,” I mutter, now completely soaked in the 10 minutes I’ve been walking down the sidewalk. “Can you let up just a little?”

The thunder roars again—a little more silent, a little more distant.


Is it possible to have a midlife crisis at 15?

The same sun and moon every day and night. A boring world. At first, this rain was a break in the monotony of endless sunny days, but even it’s become a cut and paste production now.

It’s a little embarrassing to admit, but…

Puddles in the same place. The same cars speeding by on their way to work, splashing water onto the sidewalks. The same people sitting on their front porches, performing whatever morning routines crazy people even do on rainy mornings. Seeing the same thing every day has gifted me the ability to acknowledge and avoid things without even looking, as if I can see into the future. Like finding cheat codes to the world through observation.

“Hm?” But when I look ahead from the wet pavement, I see something of an anomaly.

A U-Haul truck backed into a driveway, in a neighborhood that hasn’t had anyone new move in for years now. The house is beautiful—white and blue—with a large front yard and a backyard that’s possibly equally beautiful. Two floors and a large window that takes up the entire length of the living room wall and half its height from the ceiling down.

The woman who initially lived in that house was said to have a fetish for sunshine and had half the wall broken down to install an insanely large window. So when she started suddenly drawing her curtains and boarding up her windows, it wasn’t too much of a surprise to find out she suffered depression and decided to kill herself.

…Well, “surprise” isn’t the right word for it.

The entire neighborhood, full of gossip, knew something was wrong before the hammer dropped. Still, it’s a beautiful house. Probably cheap now, too. These people probably don’t even know the woman’s folks came to claim the last of her stuff just last week.

—6:30a.m. My usual time of arrival.

Finally, after 20 more minutes of walking, the bus stop is in view. The bus stop is normally vacant when I get here, but there’s another anomaly. Before arriving, barely visible in the mist and rain, I see two people sitting on a bench beneath its glass shelter. And upon arriving at the bench, I see that they’re two girls—one with jet black hair, and the other with abnormally, deep red hair. The raven-haired girl is almost eerily pale while the other is the opposite, having golden brown skin. Perhaps Mexican or some Middle Eastern descent?

Keeping to myself, I take a seat at the edge of the bench, next to them.

“We’re high schoolers now,” the pale girl exclaims. “What does she mean ‘curfew’? Who does she think she’s talking to? Does she know who I am?”

“Depends on who you are,” the red-head answers, her attention buried in a book she’s reading.

“The girl who skipped 8th grade to get into high school year early! I didn’t bust hump the last two years to get slapped with a curfew like a chump!” She protests. “I should call them,” she continues, already sounding exhausted.

“Maybe she’s worried you’ll go out and… I don’t know, get pregnant or something?”

“Hah! Like 9th grade boys even know how to get a girl pregnant!”

I think that would be the problem exactly, actually…

“Remember Megan last year? She got pregnant in 8th grade,” the redhead says, finally putting her book down to give the girl her full attention.

“Her boyfriend was a 10th grader…” Her voice is low and bitter.

“No, she got pregnant during the previous summer break, so her boyfriend was technically still a 9th grader,” the redhead clarifies.

“Making the transition to 10th grade though!”

“So what? Boys just wake up one day over summer break and know what ovaries do?” She challenges.

What kind of conversation is this?

“Kumari, look, you’ve only had one boyfriend your whole life,” the black-haired girl says, suddenly trying to sound more mature, compassionate—sarcastically sympathetic. “And I doubt you two even hugged.”

“What’s—” And the redhead, Kumari, gasps. Flustered and taken aback. “That has nothing to do with—!”

“So how would you know what 9th grade boys know about sex?”

“I—! Shut up!”

“Unless I’m wrong and you know more than you let on,” the girl teases, leaning uncomfortable close to the redhead. “Is that why you’re so embarrassed?”

“Amber, I’ll hit you! I’m still your big sister, even if we are in the same grade now!”

The black-haired girl, Amber, giggles and sits back.

Anyway, I know how pregnancy works, even if they don’t. I’m not worried, so why should Mom and Dad?”

“I’m sure they’d worry even more if they knew about you coming into my room, freaking out because you thought talking to a boy on the phone made your period late,” Kumari says beneath her breath with a chuckle.

I can’t help but turn my head and stifle a laugh myself.

“I was ten,” Amber growls.

Really? That was last summer. You grew three years in one?”

“You know what?” Amber finally retaliates after a few moments silence. “I don’t have time for you right now. The bus is here and my new adult life is on it.”

Saying so with full confidence, the girl hops up onto her feet and lifts her backpack from the bench. I hear the city bus closing in from the distance before squeaking to a stop in front of us. Following behind the redhead, whose sister has already gotten onto the bus and paid, I’m anxious to get out of the rain.

Gotta say, this is definitely one of the most interesting mornings I’ve had…

“Good morning, Chloe,” the bus driver says with a smile.

“What’s so good about it,” I sigh while paying my fare. “Did you know it started raining harder the moment I stepped off the porch this morning? Like, what the heck?”

“Did you deserve it?” He questions with a grin.

“Probably, but what happened to the whole ‘turn the other cheek’ thing?”

“I guess that works if you follow Christianity, but I believe in the Hindu concept of Karma, Ms. Sanders.”

I groan, turning to take my usual seat at the back of the bus.

“Then maybe this is what I get for complaining about having too much sunlight in Seattle,” I remark. I hear him chuckling behind me as the bus shifts into gear.

I find myself taking a seat right behind the two girls from the bench. They must go to the same school as me. Putting my earbuds in for the trip, and striving to enjoy at least the next 30 minutes of solitude, I close my eyes and lean my head against the window as the bus begins to roll.

First day of sophomore year… If Karma really does exist, then this year should be more interesting than last year.

Fun with Side Characters

This is going to be a long article, because making side characters fun has always been a big, big thing to me. Because, when it comes down to it, a main character shouldn’t have to stand on their own. And in the best cases, sub-characters can become more popular than the main characters.

“Ensemble Darkhorse”.

How cool would be be to have a character who either:

1. Isn’t as important to the story as the main character?

2. Doesn’t have nearly as many, or as powerful abilities as the main character(s) (In a superhero/paranormal/action story)?

3. Doesn’t get nearly as much screentime as the main character(s)?

The answer is: VERY. Know why?

Because if you can have a side character who’s just as interesting, if not more interesting, than the main character, then that means YOU have created a very interesting character who will add more dept to your story as a whole.

Basically, the easy trap to fall in is that side characters are there because the real world has more than one person in it. People have friends, and there are other people around to talk to (unless you’re a total recluse), so in following real life and making one’s story more “relatable”, you toss in a bunch of guys and gals and say “YEAH, FLESHED OUT STORY!” But all these characters do is drop in and out to talk to your main character, but they fall flat because their personalities are either deviations of the main characters personality, or don’t genuinely have a personality of their own and just agree with whatever the main character says.

But that’s NOT the way to do it.

Side characters don’t just exist for the main character to bounce ideas off of, or to make comments (yay or nay) about the main character. When it comes down to it, these people are PEOPLE–main, side, and other. They all have their own histories, unique experiences, thoughts, opinions, ups, and downs. Don’t fall into the trap of making side characters who only pop in when it’s convenient for the main character.

Think of it this way–

You have friends, right? Probably? Well, why are you friends with them? What kind of benefits or inconveniences do they bring into your life? When you meet up, are you the only subject you talk about? Of course not (I hope)! You have friends because they add a certain depth to your life that you otherwise wouldn’t have if you weren’t friends with them. There are things you probably wouldn’t have experienced, places you wouldn’t have gone, and thoughts you wouldn’t have had if you weren’t friends with that person. And no two people can bring the same experiences into your life, and in turn, you add depth to their lives as well.

That’s what side characters are! Added depth!

Have you ever gotten bored writing about your main character all the time?

Character A does this and thinks like this. So when you write new scenarios about Character A you know how it’s going to go, because you know how Character A thinks and what Character A would do. That gets boring, both for you and your audience, because it becomes repetitive.

Now, what if Character B comes in?

A big test is coming up and Character A hasn’t studied. Well, typically, Character A would take the test and fail. So Character A talks to Character B.

Character A: The test is tomorrow and I’m gonna bomb it, I just know it…

Character B: You have’t studied at all?
Character A: No, I’ve been…distracted…

Character B. Well… you could try cramming 5 weeks of studying into tonight.

Character A: …What!?

Character B: Yeah, do it all in one go! And don’t sleep! That way, when you take the test tomorrow, you’ll remember everything! That’s how I get my A’s!

So now, Character A has this thought to cram his/her studies into one night. That’s not something Character A would normally do, but that’s what Character B does. And because Character A consulted Character B, this becomes a new possibility for Character A!

But then…

Character C: Well, you could cheat this time…

Character A: …WHAT?

Character C: I got a copy of the answer sheet for the test tomorrow. I could lend it to you, if you want.

Character A: Uhm…

Character C: Or you could stay up all night studying, pass out mid-test tomorrow, and fail anyway because you’re too tired to stay awake. It’s your choice, really.

Character A: Well I’d hate to stay up all night studying to just fail anyway…

Character C: Right, so just borrow this tonight and remember to study next time. I don’t know what’s been distracting you lately, but it can’t be worth the stress you’re going through now.

Character A: Heh, you’d be surprised…

Character C: Well, if it would make you consult a delinquent like me, it must be a pretty big distraction, huh?

So now the monotony is broken up. Will Character A do what they would normally do, or go with the advice of either B or C? Makes it fun for the audience, and for you, the writer.

But there’s more to it than that! Because there’s more than just the main character in this story. Side characters can also talk to eachother, or have their own individual circles of friends, apart from Character A and the general group character A hangs out with.

But more on that later, because it’s late, and holy crap I’m tired.

So here’s an exercise!

Wanna flesh out one of your side characters who feels boring? Give ’em a backstory! What was their childhood like? What did they grow up doing? Have they experienced any significant losses or gains in life that shaped who they are? What do they typically do in their spare time? What are their dreams and goals? You know why Character A became friends with them, but why did they decide to become friends with Character A?

DON’T let your main character be the only one you spend significant time on. Treat EVERY character as if they were meant to carry their own story. Make it so that the “camera” could follow ANY of your characters around and the story would be JUST as interesting, if not more so. After all, in someone else’s life, you’re either just a side character, or a background character they pass by on the street. But that doesn’t mean you don’t have your own story to tell, right?

Think of these things! Get detailed! Turn your character into a person! And remember to have fun! 😀